I think it looks better now, because it's more simple. Comparing this to the initial design, the initial design does look too crowded and busy. Like it's having an identity crisis. But it's sorted out now, and looks normal.
The feedback I got was good, and I was advised to merge Idea 2 and Idea 3 together. If you didn't notice, the header is the same as Idea 2, as are some other things (like the title header being at a 90 degree angle) and some of the text has changed. Although it's still closer to Idea 3. Apparently I should also include parrots, or a peeking pirate. We'll have to see.
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